Yesterday I was lucky enough to be invited to speak at a Literacy Conference about some of the amazing writing our children had done when we had our adventures in Atrius’s Land eralier this year. I was very proud to be reading out some of the children’s work in front of 35 Literacy experts!
After my session, I sat in on another session where the presenters were speaking about improving and playing with sentence structure. Here we are having a go at the same session in our class. We all loved it!
The initial sentence was The dog jumped on the wall. We spoke about how if we all read this sentence we would get 27 different ideas about the dog, the wall, the timing, the intent etc so we all agreed the sentence needed improving. Here’s a short video which shows us improving the sentence and then challenging abother group to reconstruct our imrpoved sentence. We even had a go at remembering these new fantastic sentences!
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