Let’s make a story on the internet. 

Rules:

Each person writes a sentence and posts it as a comment.  They have to wait until another person has written a sentence before they can post a new sentence.  Anyone can comment, but remember the comments will be checked first.  If ever there are two comments waiting to be added, I will approve the first comment.

Remember to use: ambitious vocabulary, powerful verbs, strong metaphors, beautiful similes, colourful adverbs, descriptive adjectives and all the other tools in your writer’s toolkit.

The story should take some interesting twists and turns. As usual brilliance will earn you a limited edition All Saints Blog Award sticker from Mr Robertson!

I’ll start us of with the first comment.  GET WRITING!

Mr Robertson