haiku

April 27, 2007 Y4 2 comments

Sun and the raimbows,
The buzzing bees and the bugs,
The water is clear.

By saskia Y4

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Written by Y4 on April 27, 2007.

Verry good at making me imagen it .

Alex
Written by Alan Summers on April 29, 2007.

I agree with Alex here, you have a very vivid haiku, with nice contrasts with ‘buzzing’ and ‘clear’. Thank you!

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